Forest Duel

Posted: 2002-04-30 11:57 a.m.   Report Abuse Im sorry but this is not that great i give it a 3. It looks as if it is your first level. There are gaps between the side ramps. I get no such feeling of a forest. more of a green box feeling. If anybody is ever going to make a forest level it should at least have thoes awesome trees and plants and stuff.

Posted: 2002-04-30 12:36 p.m.   Report Abuse Good start on your level. Though it still needs some work. The wall textures sometimes don't fit right, though i think it is more the actual walls than the textures themselves. While i agree the rocks don't fit perfectly, but I dont think that needs to happen, since they are rocks and therefore no need for perfection.

However, this really does not look like a forest. There was another level that tried to pull off the forest look but had the same problem as yours. The main problem is that it is completely enclosed. It doesn't feel open or even forest like. It feels more like an overgrown Yavin temple room or something. Now there is nothing wrong with that, but your level is still a little vanilla. You need to decide whether or not you want this to be outdoors or indoors, then go from there. Outdoors needs a more open feeling and less confined. Also, it needs to feel more random then. Tree trunks, rocks, bushes, etc.

It is too simple. Too boring, no offense. I suggest putting in some more rocks, bushes, overhangs, etc. Spice it up with interesting rock formations or arrangement.

Posted: 2002-04-30 12:49 p.m.   Report Abuse Takeadvantage of JO's graphix and new lvl editing stuff. If u were ot make a forest level....make it with nice looking trees very closely aligned eoth each other.....something like a final fantasy forest....or a lost woods from Zelda. Eh..this level could defenitly use some work..but as an obvious attempt I will give it a 1 for trying! Better luck next time.

Posted: 2002-04-30 1:15 p.m.   Report Abuse Jungle? I don't think so.

Posted: 2002-04-30 3:40 p.m.   Report Abuse One point for getting past the 6-brush-room stage, but minus one point for releasing it.

Posted: 2002-04-30 6:11 p.m.   Report Abuse This level is moderately good, but the name is misleading. Definately work on it some more, add some skylights, maybe an outdoor area with trees, and more detail to the walls. In addition, get rid of the reduntant texturing. Good job so far, it just needs a little more work.

Posted: 2002-05-21 2:16 a.m.   Report Abuse Great work !!! its a perfect duelling level , its like in a big jungle !! I never saw such an awesume level ! 10 points!

Posted: 2002-05-25 3:07 p.m.   Report Abuse I dont know what you're all going on about. The lvls not that bad but the title IS misleading, and it is a bit small but its not bad for a first lvl.

Posted: 2002-05-30 11:02 a.m.   Report Abuse Derek Sagan has offered sage advice. Personally, it looks like a Tony Hawk skate park. Since it is better than anything I have made so far, and it is your first one I will give it a 3. 1 for trying, 1 for your 1st, and 1 for being brave enough to post it. Good luck on future levels.