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Oxygen

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Description

This is my first level for JO. It is a kind of small level. There are some minor glass bugs, but feel like I spent way too much time on making such a small level (12-20 hours). I just want some feedback to find out if I have the right idea so that I can make levels that people will like. Everything was made from scratch.

Screenshots

screenshot 1 screenshot 2

Level Info:

Download:
File Size:
590.6 KiB
Date:
2003-02-01
Author:
Logan
Downloads:
402

Ratings:

Score (0-10):
7
# of Ratings:
5
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User Comments:

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ENSIGN
Posted: 2003-02-01 1:23 p.m.   Report Abuse
i havn't rated this yet but from the screen shots it looks like an extremly good first level. maby I'll change my mind when I play it . but from the screen shots it looks great.
Wolf Devil
Posted: 2003-02-01 2:06 p.m.   Report Abuse
Actually from the screenshots it looks boxy, but as I have no intention of testing it out, I wont rate it.
Chibi Muro
Posted: 2003-02-01 8:25 p.m.   Report Abuse
who cares if a lvl is boxy... my god they r just makin a lvl for a game, not a simulation of real life.
Trigger Happy Chewie
Posted: 2003-02-01 11:50 p.m.   Report Abuse
Its a big box with little boxes in it.....No architecture at all. The textures are too over-used.
jEDIkIRBY
Posted: 2003-02-01 11:50 p.m.   Report Abuse
"Well comander, looks like you keep everything orderly around here. Wait, what's that space in the back for?"
"Well, we really don't know sir, just an extra little place where we dual."
"Ah, of course, everyone duals with lightsabers in the command room! Wait, what's that hologram menu for?"
"Space invaders sir. We thought it'd look good if we had an extra hologram, you know. For fun."
"Lastly, I can't seem to breath, is there some sort of ventalation shaft in this wing?"
"No"

That just about sums it up...
ghstride
Posted: 2003-02-02 9:24 p.m.   Report Abuse
O.K., O.K., I suppose I didn't try very hard and the level sucks! Sorry, at least I'm trying though, Feedback is good though. The next level will be up shortly hopefully. Except, every time I make a curve of any sort the engine crashes, so having trouble with architecture.
zizzy34
Posted: 2003-02-03 6:53 a.m.   Report Abuse
not bad for a first try
Trigger Happy Chewie
Posted: 2003-02-03 3:16 p.m.   Report Abuse
I'd appreciate if the Admins remove that comment.
KOH_Larry
Posted: 2003-02-04 3:38 a.m.   Report Abuse
jedikirby's whole sarcastic bashing session was undermined by the fact that he spelled the verb "breathe" like the noun "breath." Heh-heh

The level looks not horrible, but the shots don't show all that much.
NocturneX
Posted: 2003-02-04 2:42 p.m.   Report Abuse
He also spelled "Duels" wrong. "Dual" means "2" And also "Ventilation" and "Commander"
Nomad§oul
Posted: 2003-02-11 12:56 p.m.   Report Abuse
Instead of being so literal over someone's previous comment, why doesn't someone help the author out with his editing problem? I would if I knew how to edit but I have little knowledge on the subject. The level is ok..kind of plain..a little too plain for my tastes. Next time around pay more attention to detail and spice it up a little..but always keep gameplay in mind.

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